Maybe Baby Lite (Baby Series Lite, #1) by Andrea Smith

Recieved this has a beta copy to crtique 

The Positive 
This was so much lighter in terms of the angst and the emotions portrayed . I didn't hate the heroine like in the first copy , I could actually understand some of her emotions . Which in turn made me sympathize with how she acted. I could understand some of the decisions that she has made .

The Negative 
I'm not sure of the direction of this plot , for instance is this an Erotica, Bdsm , or just plain vanilla sex ? I couldn't understand why the hero was Alpha in one moment and then just plain bleh the next . I'm really confused about that. I feel like that could be tightened , their needs to be clear ideas of the characters . that just wasn't their for me which left me feeling meh .I appreciated that the hero and the best friend didn't like each other, in so many of these books the best friend instantly loves the hero and convinces the her friend to be with him . It wasn't so in this and that was a refreshing change .


This wasn't great for me but it was still so much better than the last one . I really see the hard work the author has put in and for that I am very proud.
I hope my critique helps Andrea ! xoxo

3.5 stars